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My first pop song

Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2019 10:11 pm
by dazzjazz
I'm usually a jazzer but somehow this popped out of my head.

https://soundcloud.com/darren-heinrich/ ... -body-rock

Re: My first pop song

Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2019 7:51 am
by stubbsonic
Fun song. Nice tones.

I think the vocals could come up 1 dB.

"what the hell-o'clock".

Re: My first pop song

Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2019 11:35 pm
by monkey man
The vocal level isn't too bad IMHO, except for one sustained note; every time it's sung it's difficult to discern its pitch.

Darren, I absolutely enjoyed that very much! Unfortunately, like the music I'm hoping to (eventually!) complete myself, I'm afraid it might just have too much class about it. :lol:

Love from Melbourne, mate. :dance:

Re: My first pop song

Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2019 3:23 am
by dazzjazz
Thanks guys. I just saw your replies, totally forgot I posted this.
Yeah vocals need a little push...

Re: My first pop song

Posted: Sun Dec 29, 2019 10:22 am
by Flanker27S
As everyone said, the vocals need to be beefed up a little. I do like the song, and you're clearly good to go with the instrumentals, but it still needs some tweaking to become great!