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My first pop song
Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2019 10:11 pm
by dazzjazz
I'm usually a jazzer but somehow this popped out of my head.
https://soundcloud.com/darren-heinrich/ ... -body-rock
Re: My first pop song
Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2019 7:51 am
by stubbsonic
Fun song. Nice tones.
I think the vocals could come up 1 dB.
"what the hell-o'clock".
Re: My first pop song
Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2019 11:35 pm
by monkey man
The vocal level isn't too bad IMHO, except for one sustained note; every time it's sung it's difficult to discern its pitch.
Darren, I absolutely enjoyed that very much! Unfortunately, like the music I'm hoping to (eventually!) complete myself, I'm afraid it might just have too much class about it.
Love from Melbourne, mate.

Re: My first pop song
Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2019 3:23 am
by dazzjazz
Thanks guys. I just saw your replies, totally forgot I posted this.
Yeah vocals need a little push...
Re: My first pop song
Posted: Sun Dec 29, 2019 10:22 am
by Flanker27S
As everyone said, the vocals need to be beefed up a little. I do like the song, and you're clearly good to go with the instrumentals, but it still needs some tweaking to become great!