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This forum is where you can post links to sound files of your projects created in Digital Performer in order to get feedback. You may also plug your band and announce live performances.
Before I reply, let me mention that I hesitate to be too critical of other's work, as some people are very sensitive. Personally, I prefer negative critique, as it points to what's weak in my productions. I appreciate thoughtful gestures, but I'd rather get honest feedback I can use than well-intentioned white lies. With that in mind, feel free to review my mixes, and blast away in kind.
The production sounds mostly good on all three. The vocals are a bit distant on Procrastination, and the vocal tuning sounds uneven and dare I say, unprofessional. The music sounds like a demo for a standard bar band: The songs and lyrics are a bit generic. The songs are competently played, and nothing to be embarrassed about, but there's nothing outstanding or memorable about them either. No hooks.
You have a handle on the recording and mixing process. I'd give you B+ for production, C- for composition, and A+ for the courage to put your work up for public critique.
recording: Mac Mini 2018 - 32GB RAM - 3.2 GHz 6-Core Intel Core i7 - two Focusrite Scarlett 18i20 - OS 14.7.2 - DP 11.34 mixing: Mac Mini M4 Pro - 64 GB RAM - Focusrite Scarlett Solo - OS 15.3.2 - DP 11.34 VIs and Plug-ins: hundreds (amassed since 1990)