Rock Song - Fresh Mix - Self Mastered

[csiaudio]

Hey!

Ok the song is coming into it's final lap before it's in the can and would like to get another set of ears on this one.

Song background: A friend and I wrote it, I recorded, engineered it, sang it and well, psudo mastered it. Another friend who played with Brad Paisley played electric gtr on it which was cool I just wish I had a kick arse stack for him to play through but we had to use plugs :face palm:
Drums are Superior Drums, bass was live, Ac Gtr live, Ebo live, BGV's are me again.
Recorded with DP, using a lot of UAD Plugs, and some others.

Please any input where the mix is lacking will be appreciated - I'm hoping the low end is close to being dialed in (weak point in my mixing/mastering).

Here is the mp3 version:
http://www.creativesoundimages.com/mp3/Rain.mp3


Here is the full wav file if you'd like to hear the mix untainted by mp3 crap

http://www.creativesoundimages.com/mp3/Rain.wav

Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment!

[guitardood]

Nice song dude. I would bring the guitar levels during the verses up a touch and maybe a touch low-mid (around 400hz) boost on the bass just for a little clarity. The bottom sounded pretty good on my system. I thought your separation on the drums sounded great and the vox sounded pretty smooth.

[csiaudio]

Thanks for the feedback GD

Yeah I've been working on getting those guitars right so what you listened to was a mix behind what I'm working on now lol. But another listener told me the same thing so that's the beauty of getting some other ears/opinions on a tune.

Thanks again!

[cbergm7210]

Good stuff as always, csi! Keep up the great work, brother!

One thought would be to warm things up a bit. (My two cents on a quick 15 minute break. Original mix far left.)

http://www.rfjmusic.com/publicmusic/Rain.mov

Cheers,

Berg

[csiaudio]

Good stuff as always, csi! Keep up the great work, brother!

One thought would be to warm things up a bit. (My two cents on a quick 15 minute break. Original mix far left.)

http://www.rfjmusic.com/publicmusic/Rain.mov

Cheers,

Berg

Hey Berg,

Yeah I like what you did there. I'll have to mess with it as you did and see if I can get those results. Thanks for your help and taking the time to mess with the track!

Cary

[csiaudio]

Good stuff as always, csi! Keep up the great work, brother!

One thought would be to warm things up a bit. (My two cents on a quick 15 minute break. Original mix far left.)

http://www.rfjmusic.com/publicmusic/Rain.mov

Cheers,

Berg

Hey Berg if you've gotta second can you give this tweaked mix a once over? Seeing if I sorta hit the mark to warm it up a bit.

Same links as first post - you may need to refresh just in case the song was stored in cache.

Thanks!